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Sorry I took so long to get this up!
This is more concept art for my game-in-progress, working-titled "La Mondo". I decided to try my hands at one of the characters who I haven't drawn yet - the dog, Arthur. He is a temporary, uncontrollable party member during the first part of the game - the departure from Arcs City. He is a shape-shifting alien who gets captured once you're almost out of the city, leaving you to rescue him. There's more backstory behind him, but I'll get into that later. I did some experimenting with this one - the trash can and Arthur especially. I know that he can be improved (I definitely foreshortened the back too much), but I can't get over the fact that I drew a dog that I don't want to toss in the garbage.
Anyway, as always, all critiques are welcome. I'd especially like to hear your opinions on the color scheme and the anatomy.
This is more concept art for my game-in-progress, working-titled "La Mondo". I decided to try my hands at one of the characters who I haven't drawn yet - the dog, Arthur. He is a temporary, uncontrollable party member during the first part of the game - the departure from Arcs City. He is a shape-shifting alien who gets captured once you're almost out of the city, leaving you to rescue him. There's more backstory behind him, but I'll get into that later. I did some experimenting with this one - the trash can and Arthur especially. I know that he can be improved (I definitely foreshortened the back too much), but I can't get over the fact that I drew a dog that I don't want to toss in the garbage.
Anyway, as always, all critiques are welcome. I'd especially like to hear your opinions on the color scheme and the anatomy.
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I like the mysterious feeling of this. 
The rough lines, simple colored buildings (no texture) and unnaturaly big head of the girl and dog are very eye-catching.
I guess the big head and big hands thingy is part of your style so I will not critique on this ('cause I hate it when someone critiques on my style)...
The girls proportion and anatomy look mainly good though her left arm is a bit too long and her limbs seem too straight. (Style issue on the limbs?)
The dogs body is too big regarding his legs. The lifted front leg bends in a weird, unnatural curve so I suggest you look some tutorial on that up.
All in one it's a lovely illustration that is well contrusted.
The rough lines, simple colored buildings (no texture) and unnaturaly big head of the girl and dog are very eye-catching.
I guess the big head and big hands thingy is part of your style so I will not critique on this ('cause I hate it when someone critiques on my style)...
The girls proportion and anatomy look mainly good though her left arm is a bit too long and her limbs seem too straight. (Style issue on the limbs?)
The dogs body is too big regarding his legs. The lifted front leg bends in a weird, unnatural curve so I suggest you look some tutorial on that up.
All in one it's a lovely illustration that is well contrusted.